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PostSubject: FIRSTIES   Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:17 pm

XD


(Probably) One shot flash-fic type thing. :O Pardon the extreme lack of length. xD I'm afraid I just found there was nothing more to be said. Longer really wouldn't have had the same effect, if you know what I mean. xD






It is wrong to write this.

It is wrong, even, to think such things, but to put them on paper-

It is wrong to dream it. But what control have I- nor anybody else!- over my dreams?

This is a world built on dreams, you know. Yet we crawl, consciously choosing to teeter forwards on fragile baby steps- To shake our heads so that the lingering remnants of sleep's residue might slide right out of our memories.

It is wrong, I have been told, wrong to write the words that flow seamlessly into my head, regurgitated by the shady depths of my imagination.

I look to the sunrise, and I see it not for what it is, not for a simple orb of light, but emotion embodied, suspended delicately by silk threads and awaiting the words to release it from it's fiery prison walls.

Is it wrong, then, to free the prisoner?
I'd follow my heart, but then it is only an organ, with no sense of direction.















>_> ...Yeah, I dunno. xDDD This is... Random. xD Don't ask me what it's about, because I'm honestly not quite sure. O_o But I like how it turned out. Although that may be due more to the fact that I wrote it in my new Crayola Wild Notes notebook, so the colors are all pretty. 8D xDDD
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PostSubject: mmhmm   Thu Aug 26, 2010 7:58 am

i love it, it reads into what people are afraid to say, the doubts and everything. sounds like something shakespear would say but this is a lot simpler and to the point Good Job!!!!! XD
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PostSubject: Re: FIRSTIES   Thu Aug 26, 2010 3:12 pm

o_o


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O_O!



I... JUST GOT COMPARED TO SHAKESPEARE. XDDDD


<3 THANKIESSSSSSSSSS
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PostSubject: mmhmm   Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:26 pm

of course!!! man, shakespear was just a person who knew how to put things on paper. there are a lot of authors who can do that but the fact he was a back then writer and is considered a classic, there are a lot of people with ideas just as good as his, your poems were one of those
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PostSubject: Re: FIRSTIES   Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:01 pm

THAT IS AWESOME!!!!! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: FIRSTIES   Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:54 am

see, told you so
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PostSubject: Re: FIRSTIES   Thu Sep 09, 2010 4:49 pm

Awww, thanks guys. <3
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PostSubject: Re: FIRSTIES   Thu Sep 09, 2010 4:57 pm

yeah!!!!
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