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bookbuyer
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| | Subject: BB's Poem Thu Aug 26, 2010 2:41 pm | |
| okay so this will be my second post.  This is a poem that I really like that I wrote. I hope that you enjoy. I warn it is somewhat depressing.  Web of Deceit Trapped in his web of deceit Body, mind captured by his warped love Unable to scream, unable to run Struggling in the threads he wove around me How can I escape from this trap? How can I break away from this love? I hurt and I cry Desperate to be free But like a spider, he paralyzes me My glassy eyes staring, enraptured Mind captivated by poisonous words Free me from this web So I may fly free once more. | |
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FlameWriter
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| | Subject: Re: BB's Poem Thu Aug 26, 2010 3:15 pm | |
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bookbuyer
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| | Subject: Re: BB's Poem Thu Aug 26, 2010 3:18 pm | |
| - FlameWriter wrote:
- I like this:D.
Thank you! I worked really hard on this one. Glad it payed off.  | |
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SW Kit_kat
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| | Subject: Re: BB's Poem Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:19 pm | |
| No it's actually based on a song and one of the pictures that go with it. If I can find the link again. I'll show it to you. Here's the song. The picture that inspired me was the one at 0:36. With the girl sitting near the spider web. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e5S8yU9e8Mg | |
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SW Kit_kat
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bookbuyer
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| | Subject: Re: BB's Poem Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:50 pm | |
| - SW Kit_kat wrote:
- wow good song XD and I love the pictures one inspired me as well!
 Ill make a topic and post it cool. Ya it's a great song and the pictures are amazing. I wrote part of three short stories from them. (if you want I'll post them). And two other poem, but there not near as good. Can i ask which picture inspired you? | |
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SW Kit_kat
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ramsvolleyball1
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| | Subject: Re: BB's Poem Thu Sep 02, 2010 6:31 am | |
| that is a good poem btw, you know you're awsome at writing XD keep it up | |
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bookbuyer
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| | Subject: Re: BB's Poem Thu Sep 02, 2010 2:39 pm | |
| aww, ty so much rams.  | |
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ramsvolleyball1
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| | Subject: Re: BB's Poem Thu Sep 02, 2010 5:38 pm | |
| hey, i only speak the truth and i love your writing | |
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bookbuyer
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| | Subject: Re: BB's Poem Thu Sep 02, 2010 5:59 pm | |
| haha, my first fan. | |
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ramsvolleyball1
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| | Subject: Re: BB's Poem Thu Sep 02, 2010 8:08 pm | |
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