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Knifapotamas
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PostSubject: Short Poem Series:   Wed Aug 25, 2010 8:08 pm

(:O For those of you who haven't already, here's your first taste of 'LYSSA POETRY!!! 8D [audience=clapping] :DDDDDDDDD [/audience] xD



Dawn


cold sunlight,
frigid in the lingering wake
of straggling images
pouring over me in streaks
of bittersweet awakening.

good mo(u)rning.





High Noon


laughter
flows like cold
dewdrops
down my spine.
delicate moments
of timeless recollection
as memories are woven
before wondering
eyes.





Dusk


pale slivers
of dancing light
meander across the
sky,
colors chasing
each other soundlessly-
reflections of a silent
ballet.




Moonrise


those fragile
wisps
of encompassing
darkness, speckled
with the light
of angels-
actors, waiting patiently
behind
the curtain to begin
their nightly
dance.











*bow* THAT'S ALL FOR NOW, FOLKS! XD


(...P.S: This is from a little while ago. :O Current style's pretty much the same, though... I think. xD This is after the slightly biggerish (yes I just coined that phrase shaddup. xD) style change I had a while back. :O Within free verse, that is. xD)
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PostSubject: wow   Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:00 am

thats good, thats really good!! xDxD
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem Series:   Thu Aug 26, 2010 3:11 pm

:DDDDD


Thanks so much! <3
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PostSubject: :)   Thu Aug 26, 2010 8:18 pm

no prob. i hope you keep writing, i love reading it
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem Series:   Fri Aug 27, 2010 12:25 pm

wow this is awesome Very Happy really good *nods*
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem Series:   Fri Aug 27, 2010 2:39 pm

i agree!! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem Series:   Thu Sep 09, 2010 4:49 pm

Thankies, all of you~! <3
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem Series:   Thu Sep 09, 2010 4:55 pm

yep!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem Series:   Sat Sep 11, 2010 10:15 am

Wow!!!!! I love the High Noon one! And the moon one because I love the moon... see it's even in my name! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Short Poem Series:   Sat Sep 11, 2010 4:07 pm

haha, the moon one is awsome
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